Forbidden Love first edit

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This is the first edit of my film. There are a few things that I would like to change, for example the title of the film is fuzzy this is very bad due to the fact it is the identity of your film and by having a film with a title that is fuzzy shows that you haven't taken care in the title so what can the audience expect from the film? another aspect of the film id like to change is the sound as some of the sound is too loud and some even doesn't play at the correct times, sound is plays a huge role in the whole of the film so if the sound is not playing in the correct places or cannot be heard it can change the feel of that particular scene. There are also a few scenes which i would like to refilm in either different locations or with different dialogue..